Your
focal character(s) provide the filter through which a reader experiences
your story. As individuals, we experience the world through what
we see, hear, smell, taste, touch and how we feel or react to the
sensory input we deal with constantly.
When you provide sensory
input to your character—and thus
to the reader—that character becomes more alive on the page.
Your reader identifies with the character, which is essential to
holding the reader in the story.
It takes only a sentence or two to
anchor the character and the reader in the story by using sound,
smell, touch, taste. Vision is
equally important, since we actually take in about 80% of our environment
through what we see, but this sense is usually the most overworked
by a writer.
Include a few sensory details throughout, and your reader
will lock in to what you’re saying.